Journal Entry #1
Hello dear 9B students! You are my favorite of them all by far! :) But I do wish you guys could clean up after yourselves EVERYDAY! On a lighter side, this is where you guys should post your Journal Entry #1 Writing Prompts 1, 2 and eventually #3 . Don't forget to include a title for each, make it attractive and appealing to the reader! Check my post 1 so that you can read my reply to your TAG about the class! Best regards...
Maria Jose Yacaman 9-B
ResponderBorrarThe Truth of Me!
My name is Maria Jose Yacaman Guevara, and i think my life is a little interesting. There are several things I like to do, like my favorite one is volleyball! I love to play volleyball and I have some advantages because I am skinny, and very tall, I am 1.70 tall! I think that's a big advantage. I am blonde, so that means I'm lightskinned. They tell me that I look like a 16 year old but I ain't, I am 14 year old, and I would be 15 on April 13th! I don't get mad if you tell me that I am sixteen, because that's what my appearance reveals to you. I love my friends. Friends mean so much to me. I think that friends mean the entire "World" without them I would literally die. I am very funny and lovely, and I like when my friends are like my way of thinking. Almost all of my friends think the way I think in various ways. I love my friends, they are like the most important thing to me! They apologize you, in anything, you guys would be always in my heart! Never change I love you so much guys!
Me,myself,and I
ResponderBorrarSome say writting about oneself is the hardesr thing in the world.Well it is,but it is a necessary torture,an attempt to know ourselves.My physical appearance is distorted,since I can only see myself through a mirror or the lens of a camara.Anyways,I guess I'm a fair skinned girl with little brown eyes radiating little to no glee.My life stands there like a solitary candle,i'm not social,i'm an introvert.I believe I have positive qualities, i'm responsible,nice and some say cunning.I enjoy many activities like learning,cooking and listening to music.Learning is wonderful,but all I get is studying.Repetitive,useless,and awfully boring.Cooking is a new passion to me,which I compliment with my knowledge of the french language.I'd like to study culinary arts in France or New york and earn three Michelin Stars.I hope my plans come as expected,but I know they won't because life doesn't work that way.
-Laura Facusse 9-B
BorrarIts all about me
ResponderBorrarRamon Godoy
JE1 WP1
To star this writing prompt, I will start with my life. I am Ramon Mauricio Godoy Mendoza. I am fifteen years old. I am studying at La Estancia School which I like becuase I have my friends in there. I am in ninth grade. I love music.I can play the bass, the tuba, and the guitar. I like a lot of sci-fi movies such as Star Wars and Star Trek. Now talking about my personality, I like to be kind to others because I think it is the way they like to be treated. I am always happy. I never like to show when I am sad or angry. I will always do the things with a smile. Now I will talk about my thoughts. I think people should do the things with a smile and believe it is a benefit for your life. I also dislike reggaeton, because it just say gross words. And it also make bad comments about men and women.
T- I like that just by reading the first 4 lines I could already tell you are positive person.
BorrarA- Is paying all those instruments your only hobbies or do you have any others?
G-I would have liked for you to write more because it was interesting.
Tagged by -Pamela Rivera
JEWP1:
ResponderBorrarAbout Myself
My name is Abril Giron and I am 15 years old. One of my favorite things in the world is to be with my family specially my cousins. But I also like to travel a lot. I am not the type of person that cares about what other people say about me. Some of my hobbies are to swim and to sing. My favorite color is black, and my favorite food are french fries. I really like desserts, specially if they are made with chocolate because I love chocolate. I also have a little brother named Santiago and he is currently in 3 grade. I couldn't be more thankful to have him because when I was 7 years old me and my family lost my little sister. But this situation made me stronger because it taught me that no matter how hard life can get you still need to be strong and continue with your life.
Abril Giron 9-B
Sergio gomez 9B
Borrart= I really like the way you named your family but specially your cousins
A=Did you find found your little sister?
G=I think you should organize more your sentences.
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ResponderBorrarJE 1 WP1 Angie Mendoza
ResponderBorrar"That's how I am"
My name is Angie Mendoza and I study at La Estancia School. I'm a tall girl and I have brown eyes, my hair is brown and I like to use very short hair. I changed my haircut seven times this year. The first one was a medium short bob then a week later I cut it more. In the two months later I wanted to cut my hair more so I ask my mom to cut more but she didn't want to take me to the beauty salon so she cut my hair below my ears. It didn't liked how it looked. Two days later I went to San Pedro Sula and in there I was going to "fix" my hair, so then i started to use a pixie cut and I had cutted like that three more times. Now I want my hair to grow a little. Some people tell me that when I talk or chat I am "cold" because I don't care very much of what are they talking about. My way of thinking is not so common, I get bored easily of somethings and I find many defects in a person to be my friends. I can hardly express fealings, I think that is why some peoplr tell cold. I consider myself well picky and that's me.
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BorrarT- I like your style of writing, is very fluid and it suddenly caught my attention.
BorrarA- I was wondering, if you have thought of leaving your hair grow?
G- Make sure to check carefully your grammar mistakes.
JE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarMyself in Lines
I am Ricardo Andres Trejo Flores and I study in La Estancia School and I am in 9th grade Section B. I consider myself a timid person that is scare of trying new things because I am scare of failure. I don't have a lot of friends but I don't I like my classmates because they can make things interesting. I am 1.80 meters tall and have black hair. Sometimes I feel depress because I think I don't belong to any group of people because they are so much different from me. Even if I try to get with them I don't feel is correct to me to be there. But they are still people that I can get along with them sometimes.
Gerardo Mendoza 9-B
ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#1
Me, Myself and I
Starting on my appearence, well I am not that tall. I am one hundred and seventy cms tall. I am actually not that skinny but at the same time I am. I have, or atleast I believe I have, a nice smile. I consider that my personality is okay because I am funny, and well I am very social. I have many friends so maybe they like my personality. My thoughts, well scientists say we have more than six thousand thoughts a day. Mines, almost all the time that I am working at something, maybe homework or any stuff, my mind is thinking about something else. It could be a song, anything. I am really a distracted guy. I do really love spending my time at friends or at family. Overall I need to have my mind on work.
T- Its surprising some facts that you list here, it sounds like you research.
BorrarA- Why do you doubt so much?
G- Try to make a larger entry next time, this one was kind of short.
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ResponderBorrarBehind the appearances
ResponderBorrarMy name is Maria Jose Velasquez. I was born on December 10th 2001, I am fifteen years old. I have 2 siblings Leonarda, who is eighteen and Vicente, who is eight. I am the tallest person in my family. My hair is color black, but when i get in the sun it appears to be brown. Im not perfect, I have lots of flaws. One of my biggest flaws is that when i get mad i usually start talking nonsense stuff. Another of my shortcomings is that ocassionally y exceed my limts. Im a very happy person, i hardly change my mood , but when i do so it is extremely noticeable. My plan is to graduate and start studying medicine, i would like to be an outstanding plastic surgeon. I focus a lot on what i do because my future depends on the actions i make right now. Sometimes it is really difficult to focus on something because i get distracted easily. Im proud to be who i am and the way i am.
T=I like your overall honesty about yourself in your writing.You seem to be authentic and very pasionate.
BorrarA= What's your favorite nonsense to chat about?
G= You should write more about your virtues and not only your flaws.
-Laura Facusse
Pamela Rivera
ResponderBorrarJUST ME
JE#1 WP#1
I AM 1.60 tall, I feel like I'm really small, I have curly black hair. I am 14.I am really social person and I usually laugh about everything.I have a really loud laugh. I don't get mad easily but when I get mad. I except that people don't make me angry. I play volleyball, and I play in the school team. Gators forever. I consider myself as a very intelligent person. I like helping people. I usually give math tutoring to people before partials or stuff like that. I like painting, I don't know if I'm good but I don't care because I like it. I also give science tutoring...kind of and I like traveling. I want to travel to Dubai but it is way too expensive so I just go to the USA.other place I like going is Roatan.it is so beautiful there.The coral riffs are amazing.My favorite colors are red and black but I also love the mint color.I love sushi and pizza...I could probably eat that all day.
Mario Ordoñez 9-B
ResponderBorrarMy life
My complete name is Mario Antonio Ordoñez Rodriguez.I am 14 years old.I am very tall for my age my height is 1.90.I like to play basketball is my hobby.I am a very happy person. i laugh at almost everything. I think that i am a very funny person because of my personality and the way I act. My favorite color is green because I like the color of the leafs in the trees. One of my thoughts is that we are not alone .I am good in several things , but i think my strongest activity is basketball. When the end of the school year comes I always have a lot of fun in my vacations. Every person has there own thoughts and opinions. appreciate think all the people have to appreciate themselves.I am happy of who i am and i will not change nothing about me.
JE # 1 WP 1
BorrarJose Ledezma 9-B
ResponderBorrarMy incredible life
My name is Jose Ramon Ledezma and I think that my apperience is like a little light skin and little fat boy and I don't mine to say it because what is most important is our interior it can sound cliche or awkward I think that they are still a mystery what beauty is inner beauty truly is ageless.That's why I think that I'm working on my personality and good ways to treat others in a proper way.A healthy attitude toward physical beauty can make the difference between happiness and unhappiness. I choose to be happy and don't overthink my physical image.Overall I'm outgoing, like to laugh a lot. I would describe me as a happy person when I'm bored. I make fun of everything. We all have goods and bad days, I know I can be piss off easily but in a few minutes my mood change to happy. I'm always sincere. Also try to learn more and more each day I have really great and cool friends. Sometime I can be creative.
JE#1
BorrarWP#1
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BorrarT: I like alot how you are very honest.You have a great self esteem, way to go.
BorrarA: Did you ask your friends what they thought about you?
G: You should watch out more for spelling, but overall I liked the way you think about yourself.
Maria Jose Yacaman
ResponderBorrarSchool=Hell
Well, I know the title may sound like...whoah! But let me tell you something... it's the truth. With all those quizzes, homework, projects, partials, classwork, notebooks... Damn! With all these stress that I have stress that I have to hand in these and that... Oh God. It really stresses me out. But at the other side I am studying and that's what matters because that would preparate me for the future no matter what, because everything involves math, science, history etc. But school is devastating! Because I have to go to practice of volleyball and band, sometimes I go to choire. But it's very rare the times that I go there. But my favorite one is volleyball, i love volleyball, I am in the school team! So that makes me like like school in parts, because because when they put us to run its like ugh. I don't like to run too much as you can see, but I have to do it no matter what. I am very competitive, but we have to be competitive in life or we would be bad in this world!
T- i love how you describe school, your title is ver accurate.
BorrarA-are you going to get involved in another extracurricular activity?
G- you should try not to repeat words a lot and organize more your ideas.
Prison Time
ResponderBorrarIn my opinion, school has different meanings for each person, it has thousands of meanings for me, each one of them depending on different school years. I mean, my first year in school was spectacular and unforgettable. We had many adventures, learned in a super simple and affective way. Over time, the meaning for me has change . Now everything is more complicated and i think of school like hell. School for me right now is the place in which i least want to be, EVERYTHING is extremely complicated, teachers fill you with homework, exams , and even projects. It is a place in which you stress easily. Freedom in schools is not something students have. In the end, the only interesting thing about it is that everything you learn right now is going to be incredibly useful in college.
T=Your title resumes with accuracy the rest of your text.You also explain perfectly what you live everyday at school.
BorrarA=Would you consider dropping school?
G= You should write more details in your text.Your texts will be much richer and interesting.
-Laura Facusse
My Description
ResponderBorrarJE1 WP1
I will talk about myself. Starting from the most simple to the most complex things about my life. I consider myself a medium to tall size person, skinny but not that much. I am a dark to light skin person, skinny but not that much. I am a very serious person, some times I like to joke, but when it is important stuff, I'm serious and I do not joke. Sometimes I am a little quiet, but other times I talk a lot. I like playing spots. But my favorite sport is Basketball I play that sport almost everyday. I also like playing video games. But one of my favorite ones is Call of Duty. That is all I can say about me.
Hello Juan!
BorrarT- I like how you are honest on describing how you really are.
A- What would you consider the best game you have played so far?
G- You should try to mention other activities that you like to do.
JEWP2:
ResponderBorrar"Prison"
School is basically a prison for me because you are not allowed to do a lot of things. And there is homework and classworks or in other words a lot of work. It is true that school is like our second home, but still I don't like it. But the thing I hate the most is habving to wake up early in the morning. I also hate when they leave a lot of projects that involve a lot of time just to work on them and then you end up without sleep. The only thing that I probably will miss about school once I graduate is probably my classmates and all the funny things they do and say.
Abril Giron 9-B
Pamela Rivera
ResponderBorrarSchool? WAIT what's that?
JE#1 WP#2
School...what does school means? Well I mean school is the prision like place we almost live in. A place were you socialize with a lot of peopla,teachers ,cleaning ladies,workers etc. The place that leaves you homework and exams,that place that leaves you homework and projects...that sometimes you have so much of them that you can barely sleep. Yep that's school. So beautiful right? But it is also the place where we learn new stuff every single day. Some are interesting stuff and some are not that interesting but anyways we have to learn it. I think the best thing in school are the friends. I just hate that not all of your best friends are always in the same class but I guess that's the point. You should be friends with every of your classmates. I feel LA Estancia Schoolhouse a heavy ways of preparing for university but I actually like it because I think that it will make it easier when you go to university. You won't feel to much pressure when you go to the university.
T- I really like your sincerity in your opinion about friends.
BorrarA- Will you change your classroom?
G- I think you have to appreciate more school.
Mario Ordoñez
wp#1 Who am I?
ResponderBorrarOh! Hello, lets start talking about one person, may you guess... Its me!! My full name is Carlos Eduardo Vijil Maldonado. I am a combination of black and white and with that I am brown. You know its rare because my mom and my dad are white! The only brown persons in my family are my uncle and my grandfather... I think that's it. M mom says I am pretty handsome and tall boy. If you want to know my weight. I'll tell you that I am a boney boy! My thoughts and personality are very strange, I always say I am rare, that I am weirdo, becuase of what I think. Like lets talk about Wednsday 17 2016, I show mom a very incredible painting someone show us on class. Do not think bad about me, but it was yhe devil sitting around the people and he was teaching them bad things. I like to study the way people think, the though of assasination. Okay I will continue saying don't think bad of me, because there is more. And other thing I really like masks and if I could buy one that will be awesome. But the thing, the masks that I like are dark masks, but the ones that I really like are the demon masks and for others this is troublesome stuff. Well for last I can say that at night when everyone is sleeping I imagine that I am a dark killer in this imaginary world I live peacefully except that I kill someone every day. I don't know i think I am crazy for what I told you here. And I don't know why people like to insult themselves, well only some of them like...
T- I like the way you started your entry, it's captivating since you start reading it.
BorrarA- Why don't you share some of the crazy ideas you have? maybe you'll get suprised of how people react to it.
G- Remeber to check twice for your grammar mistakes!
Mario Ordoñez
ResponderBorrarMy Favorite place
JE#1 WP#2
School is a important place in my life because there I learn things that help me in my life.I study in La Estancia School in Tegucigalpa.Here in La Estancia we have a good level of learning because we have a great teachers,and a great campus.I think school is my second home because I spend almost all the day in there. I also like school because in there i learn new things that I did not know that existed.School is a big part of my life , here in school , I make friends that will be forever.I will never forget each day I pass in school because every day is a special one.My school will always be a great part of my heart because I spent almost all my childhood in there and because of that i have a lot of good friends.
T= I LIKE THE WAY YOU STARTED YOUR ENTRY BECAUSE YOU ARE A VERY DEEP PERSON. Btw, you are a very good friend.
BorrarA= How would you describe yuor perfect friend?
G= aways remember to put a space when you insert a period.
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarJose Ledezma
Boring Bricks
School is the kind of place where you can meet a lot of people also in many ways. School is tough, well in classes sometimes I enjoy to learn, but sometimes I just get bored. The class I really enjoy is Language Arts because you can be part of the class, there's a lot of participation. School takes the best out of me, sometimes I'm surprised every time we do new things that I can even imagine that I can do. You meet new persons and grow with the ones you already met. We share moments with school mates, teachers and family. It never gets boring here. School is a kind of other family that I have, a place where wonderful things happens, enjoy learning, a place where every part of your life has a kind of success I wouldn't think that all the memories I have at school I can even enjoy in other school like here.
What is my definition for school?
ResponderBorrarJE#1
WP#2
For me school is a place you go when you are in your youngest age, and you are not a professional. Tn that place you make friends and learn a lot of things, that prepare you for your professional studies. But in school many people choose a different path that is not studying. They choose to do what they want, not what they're parents want. Which is to study and some day become a professional. Going to a university and maybe being an enough good student to go to another country to study and getting a good job and maybe return your parents the favor of supporting you no matter what happens. That is the best meaning I can give for school.
Adriana Zelaya 9-B
ResponderBorrarJE#1
WP#1
This is me!
In this essay I will talk about myself in three ways, by my physical appearance, about my personality, what I like to do and how I am. I'm clear skin, kind of tall, not skinny but not so fat. I have curly brown hair, like honey colored eyes. I have thin eyebrows and I have medium- sized lips. I am very creative, my hobbies are to paint on canvases, draw, and play music. I like playing instruments such like the saxophone and drums. I love playing sports, like volleyball. I enjoy all these kind of activities. I also enjoy doing exercises, like going to the GYM or just taking a walk. I am a caring person, I like helping others and treating people equally. I think everyone should be treated the same way. My goal is to graduate from highschool and study architecture. I want to be recognized and to be an excellent designer.
WP#2
ResponderBorrarFriendship
Wow! (You know I always begin my sentence with an expression). You ask me what friends are, form me, right. For me friends are people, who you can count on, that if you didn’t get something right or correct they will help you. From this term you could say two things. First that what you are saying it’s not correct, because friends do not have the obligation of writing you homework or to help you with it. Or the second thing they could tell is: that if he is irresponsible, you can’t count on him. A friend is someone that you can talk with and you being sure that he would not make bad things with the information he learned. Someone that you have so much trust and confidence in him or in her that you act with him in a different manner than others, a different treat than a normal person (but less than the person you love). Other well you could explain it is like if it was an extension of you family, someone tied up to you. We know that in life there always are rules, I will give you the most important rules for friends. First one know who your friend is and talk to him according to its personality, without reaching topics that could damage that person. The most important one will be the second one: Be open minded respect the ideas of others. Let your dreams, your brain, and your imagination flow through new ideas. The third one please don’t break this one. Be careful while you are ending a relationship, bad things could happen and the worst of them is making he person suicide, to the middle one that are psychological damages until the most common one that is nothing. But equally be careful!
My life
ResponderBorrarJE#1
WP#1
My name is sergio manuel gomez perez , i am 15 years old, I am very tall, handsome, I have blond hair , i have brown eyes , and i am thin . Well my personality is so amazing and beautiful i love people , some people make me feel so special so thats why i love people , I like studying it is one of my hobbits I think I have a really good future , I am very carrying and i love animals , i love them so much I cant explain my love to them. they are very smart, they can be a hundred times more intelligent that a human .I really like myself alot because i enjoy life , because is the only one we have , well I think about life and that should help me now or in the future . i know many of things about life , well i know life inst easy and you have to fight to for what you want. I really admire myself , i am very friendly . I really wish that people should help homeless people . people should think different about those kinds of situation that homeless have, well like you see i care about people . so this are things about my personal life.
T= I like that he cares about people and animals.
BorrarA= What other things you like to do?
G= You should improve your grammar and punctuation.
JE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarThis is who I am
Hi, my name is Sandra Cerna. I'm 15 years old. I study in La Estancia School. I love to draw that's why I love the class of art. I'm kind of a quite person. I love to draw, but I only draw when I want to or have time because I'm in school. I don't have much time because of homework. I love to draw anything but more to draw cartoons and anime. I went to the art festival and won the second place so that is one of the things that tells that I'm a good artist. I'm the kind of girl who knows that ahi is growing but she still is like a little girl. I love to watch animated movies, my favorite animated movie is 6 Big Heroes. I'm an animal lover, my favorite animals are dogs and wolfs maybe they are kind of equal or the same but I think that they are very different from each other. I will love to make a sanctuary for wolfs because they are getting in extinction so now you know who I really am. So this is who I am, this is me.
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarMy School
Hi now I'm going to tell you about my school and what it means to me. My school is many things it's a home, it's family, is almost everything. La Estancia School is the best school that I have ever been on but I can't tell the other one was bad. La Estancia School welcome me with the arms open, now I may go everywhere and everyone is nice. My school had show me that not everyone is the same, also that they have a lot of morals. They have show me they have respect, tolerance, honor, responsibility, and many other morals. The teachers are like my moms one of math, one of science and one of language. My school is my other home but with more activity for me the best of all is that I don't need to clean up but I never leave a mess because that will be disrespectful. My school is another place where I can be myself and do what I like the most to draw because there is an art class and I love it, so now you know what my school means to me, more than a school, its home.
T-I like that you say hi in the beginning, it's like you know that someone is reading.
BorrarA-What things you don't like about school?
G- You could have made a better title.
Tag made by: Ricardo Trejo
"My Second House : School"
ResponderBorrarRamon Godoy
JE 1 WP 2
First, I will define what is school. School is an institute where kids go and learn. Well that is what everyone says that school is. But , I think it has another meaning like a second place where you have your second family, your friends. School for me means a lot beacuase depending on how you go on school that will be your future. Like, if you dont work, have bad grades you will suck but if you are smart you will do great in life. I like most of the classes, in some i dont do so good as gym, but in others like math, science and other i do great. Many kids prefer playing on their consoles while there are many poor kids that would love to be where they are. I think it is very mean from the ones that say " I hate school". I also think that governments should give more help to poor children that need some education.
Jose F. Vargas
ResponderBorrar9B/ JE#1 WP#1
How am I?
I consider myself an interesting, mature and funny kid. I am fourteen years old and I already know how to speak three languages. I don't have a ripped body, but it's perfect for sports since I am kind of skinny. Girls used to love my hair, well, before I had to cut it all because of a bet. My clear brown eyes still make girls fall in love. I am a funny but responsable and a serious person when I need to be. With my friends, I like to goof around and we usually make fun of everything we find funny. I am really athletic, I play soccer, basketball, volleyball and tenis. I like to go out with my friends and meet people from other schools. Almost everyday, I like to watch "Youtube" videos about funny stuff, games, and interesting facts. I receive french classes every saturday, and then I usually go out for a run. To conclude, I consider myself a funny person that likes to have fun and just enjoy life. I am a cheerful person, I have a good attitude (in my opinion), and I don't really care what people think about me.
Jose F. Vargas
ResponderBorrar9B JE#1 WP#2
Best Place
School is a very important part of a person's life. Here is where we go from the morning to the afternoon, always out whole day. The purpose of school is to prepare students (us) for the university to then study a career that we'll choose to work for the rest of our life. I've met a lot of people throughout all my years in school, from different grades, ages and overall personalities. School has always been like a second home for me, because on top of teaching us about math, science, etc. they teach us values such as respect and friendship. My friend are like my brothers and sisters, we help each other and support each other in good and bad situations. I consider them as my family, because they are the ones that are always there when I need them. Teachers are also there to help when you need to, and most of the time they help us in every way.
T=I really liked that you expressed yourself
BorrarA= How do you think that you could make your experience better?
G= You should really work on enjoying all the classes you have
Jose Ledezma
Adriana Zelaya
ResponderBorrarJE#1
JE#2
"School" a very tragic word. School is the biggest jail in the world! Nah, just kidding, school is one of the most awful and beautiful places on earth. Is our second home, our second family, but for others, it isn't that pretty. For other people, school is the worst place ever, maybe because of bad people, making them feel bad. I think we should help them to stand up and to move on. For me school is our second family, school is a big chapter of our lives. There we shared many experiences, specially the funny ones. We have learned something, school is that placw, where we met all those strange and beautiful creatures named friends. Where we learned thousand of new things, and new lessons. It is a place where we left our heart, soul, blood, and sweat. School is our second family!
T- I liked the way you talked about the school!
BorrarA- How do you think we could help the people that are being treated badly?
G- I think you should tell us about activities you do in school.
Abril Giron 9-B
JE 1 WP2. Angie Mendoza
ResponderBorrar"My School!"
Well,school is important for me because there I learn things and I have my friends in there. School means for me a place for do "social life". School is like my other family, I have my teachers that I love and my friends, I like to go to school because my house is very boring and I don't have any brothers so I enjoy going to school. I like math, science, music etc. La Estancia School is a very good school and the better school I have been. This school is like my other family because I am in school more time than I am at home, literaly, when I am at home I only do homework and then sleep and the eight hours I'm sleeping is like if I am not home. When I get to school every morning I live to talk to my friends and go to walk around the school to spend time, because this school is very big! There are plenty people who hate school and should love it because they have money to pay school but other people want to go to school but they can't.
Ricardo Trejo
ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#2
Lifeschool is...
School or life in school for me is had good and bad things loke every other thing in the world. For me life in school it has good experiences like being with friends or making new friends and having good experiences that you will never forget. But it has also times where things don't go well and I stat disliking or hating school. For example when they put us alot of work in a short stand of time or when they make us do a hard work.
I agree with you that school is a mystery we never know if today it will be a good day or a bad day in school. Can you tell an interesting experience of you during school? I think it would be better to write more about the topic, so the reader can read more about you.
BorrarSergio Gomez
ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#2
What is significante of school
Well school is an institution for young children and is the right place to learn new exciting things.It also prepares you to be a professional person and the most important of them is that it prepares you to live a brand new life , It also teaches you to obey the lawand to respect everyone around you. school is a very excellent place to have fun with your friends and educating yourself , school is the most exciting thing in the world,it should of help people to not discriminate. i say this because to be honest with you, in all of the school around the world they are alot of discrimination so school should worried about that more because children are being so discriminative , well but to me this is the significance of school.
School is cool
ResponderBorrarBy:Laura Facusse
School is necessary for me,because it opens doors in life.I really appreciate the opportunities my parents are giving me.Sadly,many children around the world aren't able to assist to a school.I'd like to help them out and end with analfabetism.Someday,this will become a reality.In the other hand,school to me is midly amusing because I get to observe my classmates talking about absurd and banal stuff which makes me laugh,sometimes they get annoying but,I practice the principles of tolerance.One thing I truly detest from school is the constant stress and burdens.Exams,homework and projects constantlt pressuring us and the worst of all is school's pressure is miniscule to real life pressure and stress.I really don't want to get old.Adult life seems too hard compared to the irreality we currently live at school.School is a bubble that will burst as soon as I get out.
T: I liked the way you expressed your feelings.
BorrarA: Is that what we really talk about?
G: You should work harder to like school.
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ResponderBorrarDaily life of Rashell
ResponderBorrarI'm a girl who lives in Honduras. I am fifteen years old ,I'm not so tall , in my grade, I am one of the smallest girl, my measurement is 1.55.they cut my hair during summer. I use eyeglasses since 2nd grade, my skin is like dark. I don't know what people think about my personality, I really dont care but I consider me kind of funny and we can said that my laugh is... original! I'm not so good at school but at least I try my best sometimes... I like to help people, when they need me I give a hand. I have a lot of hobbies one of them is sport, I like to play all the sport even when I'm not good at volley, basketball and I like to run marathons. I'm very creative when we talk about art and i love to sing even when I don't sing so well but I sing with emotions.
Ramon Godoy 9-B
BorrarT- I really like your essay and yes, your laugh it is very original.
A- What type of music do you like and dislike?
G- So should add more details about the things you like the most such as sports.
During School
ResponderBorrarWhat does school means to me? Waking up at 5:00 a.m to learn, just a building. But what do the people of the school means to me? Well, they mean a lot, for me a school is a place where I never stop to laugh, every school has their drama and its funny. Everybody, just wants to have fun, is the time to take a risk or lose the chance, you better take the risk! We have to make a new adventure, and creating good memories because ones you're grown up you can't come back to change something in your life when you were a young person. I know I have to change, think of the feature. I need to study more, everything that I do now is for my feature, and that is the reason why I want to get better grades. School prepares us for the future, in life sometimes you win sometimes you learn, and this is the time to make mistakes, another mistake and another but not just doing a mistake, no, of that mistake we learn and this time we are going to correct that mistake and find out our success.
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#1
ME, ME ,ME
Hi, my name is Ian Antunez. I am 15 Years old, I have dark brown eyes, I am chubby, and I also like to play basketball, but i mean like A LOT OF BASKETBALL. Every day my dad would take me to play basketball. I also think im funny because i sometimes make someones day up, I dont know you guys, but thats my personal opinion about me. Oh I als forgot that i am tall, I measure 1.74. I also forgot about my school performance, well... I aint the best student in the world, but atleast I try. Well I guess that will be it.
Hello Ian
BorrarMy name is Gerardo Mendoza
I'll TAG you today.
T-You should try to check your spelling a bit, but I really like the way you describe yourself.
A- Do you think you can get to have a professional life as a basketball player?
G-Be careful with punctuations and spelling, your way of speaking will see much better!
JE#2
ResponderBorrarWP#2
Lets talk about school
La Estancia School is a very very good school, I enjoy being in LES so much, Because I have a bunch of friends and also learn a new thing every day. I enjoy being with my teachers even though I am not doing well at school at the moment. I dont like waking u early, it is one of my bigest problems, and also homework, Leaving that apart, every year is different, because you have new friends new teachers etc.Well... I guess thats it for today
Gerardo Mendoza-9B
ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#2
Is school worth my time?!
School really means a lot for me and maybe sometimes its like I have many thoughts about school, sometimes I wish I could live there forever, otherwise sometimes I hate it. For me actually school is like my second home, my second family. I love people on school. School is something that means a lot for every kid or teenager on earth, its like basic for everyone. School really means a home and a family there is so much we learn on school, we have never learned at home and that, I believe it is valuable for everyone's memories, to remember friends, loves, girlfriends and every stuff like that.